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Comments For Brightest Flame

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Reviewer: pandemonium_213 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2013 - 07:30 pm
Title: Brightest Flame

Oh, this is very moving, Astris!  You really delve deep and effectively into Nerdanel's headspace.  Writing with such depth is not an easy task, and you've achieved it beautifully here.  You pulled me right into Nerdanel's turmoil, her pain, her love for her husband, so close yet so distant from her.  Her yearning for his fire, even though it will pain her.  A beautiful and very sad story.  Well done!  



Author's Response:

I'm glad you thought I got into her head well - this story was kinda fun to write, and I like Nerdanel a lot, so...

Thank you for your kind review!

Reviewer: Himring Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2013 - 04:30 pm
Title: Brightest Flame

The way you blur the lines between Nerdanel's emotional state and her premonitions, between dream and reality, is very effective.

And very sad.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you think it worked :)

Reviewer: Ellynn Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2013 - 04:17 am
Title: Brightest Flame

Well done. I love your descriptions (curtain of silence) and how you describe Nerdanel's thoughts.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.




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