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Comments For Hour of Departure

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Reviewer: The Wavesinger Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29, 2016 - 08:46 am
Title: Chapter 1

Oh my. This is a beautiful, beautiful story. I sympathize with both Minyelmë and Lalwen, and oh my heart. So much passion and anger ♥. I can feel both Lalwen's defiance and Minyelmë's horror, and the description is very well done.

A very tiny nitpick--the AO3 logo appears right at the beginning of story, for some reason?



Author's Response:

Fixed the logo thing--I haven't the faintest idea how that happened! And thank you for the lovely comment, I'm so glad you liked it. <3

Reviewer: My blue rose Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21, 2015 - 10:50 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Very good! love your description, especialy how Minyelmë is feeling and Lalwen's reaction--those crazy Noldor, always so intense lol! But i think my favorite part was the word 'Unlight'.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! Though I can't take credit for the term "unlight"--I'm certain I got it from someone else; unfortunately I can't remember who.




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