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Reviewer: Dawn Felagund Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2017 - 07:47 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Awww, this was lovely and so hopeful. I love that you've woven not only cosmology but its core lesson--that nothing ends but is only transformed--into this piece. I also like your Olorin, although I'm glad that the final lesson came through Ilmare, a character we hear so little of (as indeed we hear very little of Varda, despite her professed importance!) but who must have been so important.




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