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Comments For The Golden Dancer
I really like this image of Indis in a warrior's dance, combining strength and beauty. I can see why she captivated Finwe!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I hoped to get that across. :)
Pre-review: I already read this and was impressed by this Indis and the psychology of Feanor's reaction. I keep meaning to come back and re-read when less tired. I thought I'd better leave a comment, in case it takes me even longer...
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I'm especially glad that the psychology of lil' Feanor's reaction struck a chord with you. So, thanks for letting me know, and take your time! :)
This is beautiful! I had saved it for later when you posted it, and just now I found the time to read. You have changed my image of Indis, which is good. (g)
Poor Feanor, he won't like what happens next.
Author's Response: Nope, he won't like it one bit! But wow, I'm thrilled to hear that I managed to change your image of Indis with this little piece! Thank you so much or letting me know! :)
Terrific visuals--very filmic. Poor messed up Feanor. Too bad he had to take everything so hard. It's a rotten shame he couldn't have permitted his reflexive liking for and interest in Indis, instead of turning it into a forbidden act. Probably seeing his father's interest unsettled him as well.
Very well done. And it definitely conveys Indis being awesome. It worked really well for me.
Author's Response: Ooh, thank you so much! Yes, it's definitely a sad thing that FŽanor is taking it so hard (and being to hard on himself). And I'm thrilled that "awesome Indis" worked for you! Somehow, she always ends up being a bit of an evil stepmother, or alternatively, a saintly victim to her step-son's temper, and I wanted to let her shine (hah) for a change. They could definitely have gotten along in a less complicated constellation. I think that's part of FŽanor's inner conflict, that there are actually things about Indis that he admires and likes, but HOW DARE HE? Again, thank you for your comment!