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Reviews For The Very Lands

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Reviewer: Hrymfaxe Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15, 2017 - 02:45 am
Title: The Very Lands

I enjoyed this! As the others I had not thought about how that event would be felt all over the world, but this was a great way of telling that story. And thank you for shining a light on Celeborn - I really like him as well, and always enjoy finding stories about him. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! As for Celeborn, I have to admit the random character generator is responsible for his appearance - I just thought it a nice idea and went with it.

Reviewer: Silver Trails Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13, 2017 - 01:55 pm
Title: The Very Lands

This is a great story! I didn't realize they would have felt it!

Author's Response:

Thank you! Eru did redesinge the whole world and not just Nûmenor, and pulling a flat earth round would have had some impact...

Reviewer: Himring Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12, 2017 - 03:44 am
Title: The Very Lands

I hadn't previously thought of the earthquakes reaching so far inland as Lothlorien, but of course they well could have!

I was distressed with Celeborn at the fall of the trees and much relieved when they met up with Galadriel and the rest at the end.



Author's Response:

Well, Eru changed the world from flat to round, so I imagine that might have had some consequences.

I'm so glad you could empathize with Celeborn! I was really scared he might seem too one-dimensional, so thanks a lot for the feedback.

Reviewer: Lyra Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11, 2017 - 01:56 pm
Title: The Very Lands

Aww, this was both upsetting and heartwarming. Celeborn's worry was so convincing, and I loved the detail about the young hunter giving away their position and his tender age with his shout. The ending showed how much Celeborn and Galadril give each other strength - very nice.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Celeborn doesn't get nearly enough love; most of the time all attention is focused on Galadriel. But they need each other to function, and I'm glad that came across!




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