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Comments For Fourth Father

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Reviewer: Silver Trails Signed [Report This]
Date: February 17, 2018 - 10:26 am
Title: Chapter 1

Beautiful!

Author's Response:

Thanks!! :)

Reviewer: Lyra Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2018 - 04:13 am
Title: Chapter 1

Your Gil-galad is wonderful. Your Elrond is also wonderful. Your analysis of the situation feels very astute - Elrond's feeling of being a kind of prisoner, albeit a honoured one; Gil-galad's willingness to take Elrond's feelings into account and understand rather than judge. I really liked how you let them navigate this complicated mess and actively try to communicate and make things better rather than worse. Thank you!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I really appreciate your kind words and feedback. I'm glad you like my first attempts at these characters and I hope to write more of them soon :)

Reviewer: Gabriel Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05, 2018 - 03:05 am
Title: Chapter 1

This was such an emotional story. And considering this was your first attempt at writing Elrond and Gil galad I'd say you did very well and I would read more if you have it.

I especially liked Maedhros' letter to Gil galad. Him humbling himself before the High King and begging Gil galad take Elrond and Elros into his charge. Elrond's outpouring of emotion at what lengths Maedhros and Maglor are willing to go to ensure their protection etc.

Thank you for sharing.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your kind words! I’m defonitely planning to write more Elrond and Gil-galad, and hopefully some more Maedhros too (first time for him as well). The letter was a last minute addition to the story that I had a lot of fun writing. I appreciate you reading my story :)




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