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Comments For Whispering Winds

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Reviewer: whitewave Signed [Report This]
Date: December 28, 2008 - 07:05 pm
Title: Chapter 11

A heart-breaking end to their romance.  It's just like Caranthir to seek out the "secret passages".  You painted a very good picture of how the Doriath kinslaying could have happened, especially the Feanorian "blood lust". I liked the words you wrote for Celegorm's speech and the reaction of the Feanorians to it. The battle between Caranthir and Celeborn was very exciting to read as well. 




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