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Reviewer: Jedi_Tarja Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15, 2010 - 09:47 pm
Title: A Real Beauty

Lovely romance in this. Well done.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this story.

Reviewer: pandemonium_213 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14, 2009 - 11:00 am
Title: A Real Beauty

"Or do I have dirt on my face?"

Ha! A lot of electricity in a short 206 words!  Very nice. 



Author's Response: Thanks! I think this one belongs in my “seeds of stories” collection. I really want to write more about them.

Reviewer: Moreth Signed [Report This]
Date: March 08, 2009 - 05:08 am
Title: A Real Beauty

I love your impetuous Aredhel, and I can just see her and Turko playing 'One, two, three, where's your breakfast?' in the woods of Valinor...

She threw her arms around his neck.

Yes, she would! Also good to see Turko in happier times :D

Reviewer: Rhapsody Signed [Report This]
Date: March 08, 2009 - 01:25 am
Title: A Real Beauty

Awww, this is rather cute :) The way you write them, they have quite equal tempers, making it feel quite logical why they'd spent so much time together.




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