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Comments For Mother Knows Best

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Reviewer: Dawn Felagund Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11, 2009 - 02:22 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I was so excited to see someone wrote for this challenge which *mumbles* I kind of wrote in haste just to get the newsletter out. >.< As always, the humor that pervades your writing is so welcome and nicely done as ever. This line made me laugh out loud: "Every year I got taller and bigger and hairer and hungrier." Your use of a modern voice works well too; I wanted to see Loswen in a gingham dress with a cast iron skillet and Annael lounging back in a pair of overalls. :)



Author's Response: I know, the whole Great-Depression thing, right? :) That's kind of what I had in mind when I wrote this. Thanks!

Reviewer: Araloth the Random Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10, 2009 - 08:46 pm
Title: Chapter 1

An interesting take on Tuor's earlier life! He's a bit of a rascal, methinks. He reminds me of one of my guy friends, actually. Thanks for writing!

 Araloth



Author's Response: Thanks! I was actually kind of worried about this one, since it's so different from my usual style (no bad jokes, etc) and it's good to know someone likes it.




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