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The Apprentice by pandemonium_213

[Reviews - 67] Printer

Summary:

An ambitious young Noldorin man of Ost-in-Edhil lands a coveted appointment as an apprentice to the most skilled master smith of the Gwaith-i-Mirdain: Istyar Aulendil. The apprentice's mentor, a prodigy of the Aulënossë, has been sent to Middle-earth by the Valar and has knowledge of exotic and wondrous technology. Istyar Aulendil also has notoriously high standards. The apprentice must meet his mentor's expectations if he is to become a journeyman and work on an important new initiative.

MEFA 2008: First Place, Villains, General.

 


Rated: Adult
Categories: Characters: Celebrimbor, Original Characters, Sauron
Challenges: None
Genres: Drama, General, Science Fiction
Warnings: ***Rape/Non-consensual Sex, Expletive Language, Violence--Moderate
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes
Word count: 37182 Read: 5213
Published: 04/08/07 Updated: 04/08/07

Story Notes:

 MEFA08 Award Banner by Elena Tiriel

 Banner by Elena Tiriel

Warnings are given for examination of a Man's disturbed thoughts and sexual predilections: non-consensual sex and pederasty are commented upon in Chapters 7 & 9, but there are no explicit descriptions. The Adult rating is also given for some violent imagery in Chapter 12. As for the alternate universe business and my affection for "scientifiction," well, forewarned is forearmed.

1. Acknowledgments and Author's Blathering by pandemonium_213 [Reviews - 7] (1321 words)

Yes, it's verbose, but perhaps worth a gloss-through of a read.

3. Chapter 2: The Interview by pandemonium_213 [Reviews - 6] (4129 words)
A short list of primary characters and a glossary may be found in the End Notes of this chapter.

5. Chapter 4: Fieldwork in Tharbad by pandemonium_213 [Reviews - 4] (5015 words)
Glossary in End Notes.

6. Chapter 5: Illuminati by pandemonium_213 [Reviews - 5] (3151 words)
Glossary in End Notes.

11. Chapter 10: Initiation Rites by pandemonium_213 [Reviews - 4] (1257 words)
See end notes for commentary on canon and the Rings of Power.

12. Chapter 11: The View from Barad-dûr by pandemonium_213 [Reviews - 4] (2517 words)
Comments in End Notes.

13. Chapter 12: Derivations of Hope by pandemonium_213 [Reviews - 11] (5418 words)

As of 04/29/2008, modifications have been made to this chapter so that it aligns, although perhaps not seamlessly, with The Elendilmir, the sequel to The Apprentice.

Glossary and comments in End Notes.