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My Heart Lies Where My Eyes Alight by wind rider

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Summary:

 

 

In nearly every home, its dwellers have rooms, items or nooks special for themselves. It is no different even with the greatest of the Valar, Manwë and Varda. These are five features of their home most beloved by the couple with their various reasons.

 

 


Rated: General
Characters: Ainur
Challenges: Fifth Birthday Celebration
Genres: Drama
Warnings: Mature Themes
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes
Word count: 7905 Read: 2817
Published: June 21, 2009 Updated: September 11, 2010

Story Notes:

Of the Prompt

 

In this prompt, five features of Ilmarin, the abode of the Valar Manwë and Varda, are ‘explained out’. The features can be rooms (or a part of it), decoration (tapestry etcetera), or areas (a quiet courtyard or places like that). There could be original characters – whether fully or borrowing the disused names from Tolkien – appearing here, but the main characters are Manwë and Varda. The timeline, if there is any, is given before each part of the five pieces; all pieces, however, are not closely connected in this regard.

 

Guide for Dialogues

 

“…(Valarin speech, spoken aloud)…”

`…(mind speech)…

2. 2: 'Local Rain' by wind rider [Comments - 0] (529 words)

 

 

3. 3: A Reminder for Earlier Happiness by wind rider [Comments - 0] (1223 words)

I need a beta reader to help me with this piece up to the last (the fifth) content-wise. Would someone please? I need to delf deeper into the story in each piece, but I cannot do so alone, given my limited knowledge of Tolkien's earlier ages.

 

4. 4: Star Seedbed by wind rider [Comments - 1] (1028 words)

 

 

5. 5: Butterfly Garden by wind rider [Comments - 0] (2442 words)