Oh, wonderful! You included Azaghâl! That part in the account of the Battle of Unnumbered Tears comprises some of my favorite lines of Tolkien narrative prose:

"Then the Dwarves raised up the body of Azaghâl and bore it away; and with slow steps they walked behind singing a dirge in deep voices, as it were a funeral pomp in their country, and gave no heed more to their foes; and none dared to stay them[! my emphasis added]."

I love that you chose to tell a story of what follows his death and how his comrades respond--resolute and courageous.

isnt the magic lighting on the doorway made of ithildin, and isnt it elvish ?

not that i dont like your sketches, very evocative :)

I remember this from B2MeM! I commented on it in more detail there, but I wanted to say again that I really loved this. My favorite bit is the Dwarven lords wearing the dragon's fire on their heads as a defiant reminder.