Oh this is beautiful, what a plotbunny!!! This piece has a fabulous feeling that matters come to full circle, after all these ages, Maglor, grandson of Finwe, returns home in the East. It is very fitting, to me it feels like an interpretation the professor would have liked!

I agree with Rhaps :) This is a very beautiful story. I love to see Maglor finding his home after ages of wandering ME. And *where* he finds it! I also love the spontaneous reaction of that elf when he heard they would set a permanent camp at Cuiviénen

Great job! It'll be a splendid B2MeM submission. Thank you for sharing :) 

I cannot believe that I never commented on this story. This is completely beautiful. I also very much like that he is not alone.

I love the image of the children presenting them with "small gifts of food or scented woven cloth."

Another evocative description is: "A large body of water, surrounded by areas which were most certainly once part of a lake, but are now dry. Small rivulets feed into the water from the remains of mountains behind them, the whole area looking as though broken by a tumult of the earth."

And, last but not least, the look on the elf's face and the changing emotions when Maglor tells him they are staying.