Golden Flower by Raiyana
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Summary:
What is left behind to linger in time.
Major Characters: Legendary/Mythical Character(s)
Major Relationships:
Genre: Ficlet
Challenges: Queens of the Quill
Rating: General
Warnings: Character Death
Chapters: 1 Word Count: 295 Posted on Updated on This fanwork is complete.
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Prompt: https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/50343/one-girl
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They had seen him fall, burning, screaming, tumbling over the edge of the cliff.
They had watched him stand, protect, defend, watched him safeguard the flight from the ruins of what had once been beautiful and safe, and now little more than heaps of smouldering wood and tumbled down stone.
The golden one, the hero among heroes whose name had already passed into song and legend.
But now he was dead.
And they did not dare to look.
Turning away from the cliffs and the horror of the smoking city, walking paths barely visible among the craggy peaks of the mountains that had so long shielded them from the wrath of the Dark Fortress, the survivors wept quietly.
For the enemy might still be on the hunt.
And yet flowers bloomed among the rocks, mocking their plight with vivid colours.
Those who had fled the ruins were long gone when footsteps once more sounded among the peaks and valleys.
The eye caught on a perfect flash of gold, the petals small, but so bright against the drab grey stone as to promise deliverance.
Promise hope.
The stone was blackened, still, burnt and cracked with the violent heat that had fallen from its heights. No gentle wave had cleaned the rock of its testament, the water leaving the memory of a long-ago battle to stand, unknowable to most, yet loud enough to scream in anguish for others.
And none who now lived remembered why the mountain here had turned black with grief.
Nor why the golden flowers bloomed at its foot, bright as sunshine and the new spring, yet lasting well into the late autumn, valiantly fighting against the darkness of oncoming night, rising to smile at the morning sun with the dawn.
Except one.
Powerful emotions and a…
Powerful emotions and a poetic ending!
I was especially struck by the mountain turning black with grief, contrasting with the flower.
Well done!
Well done!
This is so evocative! I…
This is so evocative! I thought the image of the mountain turning black with grief was particularly powerful, and it really completes the feel of the story.
Oooh! The mountains black…
Oooh!
The mountains black with grief is an amazing backdrop for the golden flowers.
(Also, he went back??)
Oh oh the pain so emotional…
Oh oh the pain
so emotional and beautifully done!