I love it Oshun. The descriptions, and how, in this shorter piece, how clear and vivid Fingon's character is, and also Maedhros'.

If you think he hasn't suffered enough I'll take his unforgiven sins upon myself.

That is wonderfully your Fingon, in those words.

Reposting my MEFA review:

In this ficlet, we get a vivid glimpse of the increasingly forbidding landscape that Fingon the Valiant has to cross to reach Maedhros hanging on the cliff face and his understandable moment of fury at Manwë for allowing Maedhros to suffer. The words of the song that the title of this ficlet is based upon are indeed quite apt in describing the deep and abiding love that Oshun has envisioned between Fingon and Maedhros. I really love her rendition of their story.

Long overdue, I've finally tracked down my MEFA review...

It's not often that a short piece like this can evoke such a wide range of emotions, but this is exactly what this ficlet does. Despair, hope, anger, sarcasm, fondness, compassion, resignation, love, we get to know Findekáno's mind as he treks towards Angband to search for his cousin. No grandiose words or gestures, just honest and believable thoughts, including the mundane practical matter of hunting to eat (because oshun's words are about the man, friend and lover, not the dazzling hero).

His monologue or, more accurately, one-sided dialogue directed to Manwë, is amazingly effective, combined with the journey's description and Findekáno's matter-of-fact reminiscing of the days before the Darkening, before chaos and danger prompted Maitimo to distance himself in order to protect his lover. The little detail about the rocks paints Findekáno's longing with a single, perfect brushstroke. Really, there is so much to enjoy within these few words! Just beautiful.