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I adore this segment!

Some great lines. My favorite probably is:

"The same as ever. The song will run its course. People will live and die. There will be deeds of amazing valour and of baffling idiocy. I will always have something to weave into history, and you will always have something to cry over."

This is amazing! I really like Vaire's attitude, here. Especially how snarky she is at times. This exchange with Earendil had me laughing:

""I am not certain that I understand," says Vairë. "Námo does, supposedly, but he appears to think that I should just do my job and stop asking questions. Did I say that out loud?"
"You did, lady."
"Pretend that I didn't."
"I shall, lady.""

The Valar are such interesting characters to think about, because of how different they are from humans. This story does a wonderful job of keeping that "alien" feeling while also making the characters sympathetic. 

I don't usually go in for religious themes, but I thought the part with the nativity story was really clever...I mean, Eru trying to subvert his own rules? I thought it was an interesting notion!

Great story!! 



Thank you! So glad you like Vaire's attitude (I figured she'd become rather deadpan, with her job), and also that you find the Valar convincing in their humanoid alienness.
I can't claim credit for the notion of "subverting his own rules", which is a relatively common reading in (liberal?) theology, but I'm glad you think I pulled it off well!
In conclusion, thank you for your lovely comment!

Daeron. :) I keep vaccillating on whether or not the two would a) meet (they both end up walking the shores and making sad music, but there's a lot of shore in the world...), b) talk to each other and c) get along. But it's a fun idea to play with, so I've actually written quite a few pieces in which they live through events in history together. I'm assuming that their love of music, and the burden of immortality they both share, would eventually overcome any hard feelings left by the sack of Doriath...

My favorite line for this chapter is when Namo opines that he's not sure if they can blame all the discord on Melkor.  For the first time in this story, I kind of felt sorry for Namo.

From this line "even if we were still in office",  I take it that the Valar are no longer in office at this point?



Knowledge is a burden, so Námo's job can't be easy, either. Glad I managed to conjure up some sympathy for him - I don't particularly like what I see of him in Tolkien's works, but then, he can't help that (on several levels)...
They officially laid down their office just before the Downfall of Númenor, and while they may technically have taken it back up afterwards, with Valinor physically removed from the world, their influence is a lot less immediate. So I'm assuming that they're no longer "the Powers of the World", even though they continue to do their jobs as usual.

Not necessarily - I assumed that she became aware of Feanor's release, and then automatically jumped to the conclusion that it was time for the world's end, and it would be an end in fire. (Of course, with Melkor as the counterpart, ice is still just as likely. In the Ainulindale, Eru specifically points out "the cunning work of frost" as Melkor's part...)