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Every now and then, I return to your Mighty Love universe; these fics mean a lot to me. Today, I'm visiting here because the GBBO comment challenge, which gave me an opportunity to choose one of these ficlets for re-reading.

I love how you have created so many lovely original characters in the series. In this fic, Reviahûn flying with Eönwë as falcons is such a delightful scene, and what follows afterwards is perfect. <3