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I am a big fan of TEAMWORK in the bedroom (or bathtub), and three simultaneous orgasms is nothing to scoff at, so my greatest respect to Alphangil and Maedhros for this excellent double-team effort. Here are some details I especially enjoyed:

- the cold of the Helcaraxe staying perpetually in Fingon's bones
- Maedhros' awkward aborted kiss of Alphangil (ew, girls)
- "only one urgent need arising" INDEED (eggplant emoji)
- "a bird on the wings of two storms at once" - beautiful line!

Thank you so much for giving this a shot and glad the teamwork worked for you! I hope the Maedhros was not too much of a detraction, and thanks for bringing up the moments and lines that worked for you. I had to laugh at the "ew, girls!" line because yep yep, he literally has had neither experience with nor interest in them so far, and I doubt that he would be interested in Alphangil at all if she weren't Fingon's wife.