The Fishes Advise Cirdan in the Matter of the Elven Rings by Himring

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Fanwork Notes

This fills a number of the prompts of the Dark Matter challenge, as it does not contain any of the items in the "Words and Letters" section of the prompt generator, I believe. I suppose it might fail to not include "watery setting" or "poetry", although your mileage may vary.

Apologies for my lack of  graphic skill! I hope, with a bit of goodwill, you can recognize three fishes. For more notes on the original work by Morgenstern I am riffing on and also on the title, see below.

Fanwork Information

Description:

Adaptation of a concrete poem by Christian Morgenstern for the Dark Matter Challenge.

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Genre: Experimental, Humor, Poetry

Type: Pastiche

Challenges: Dark Matter

Rating: General

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Posted on 10 March 2025 Updated on 10 March 2025

The Fishes

The original adapted here is Christian Morgenstern's Fisches Nachtgesang (Fish's Night Song). More on this in the end notes.

3 columns made up of  alternate sequences of  hyphens and the letter u, arranged in the outline of three fishes side by side, facing upwards

Chapter End Notes

Morgenstern's poem alludes humorously to a famous (and solemn) short poem by the German poet Goethe, Wanderers Nachtlied (Wanderer's Night Song). Morgenstern's poem shows the outline of a single fish, which is made up out of two types of diacritics conventionally used to describe classical metre (macron for length, breve for short vowels or syllables), arranged to look like fish scales. The point is also that the fish is mute! (Link to a scan of the page of the book uploaded to Wikipedia.)

My own title alludes to the scenes featuring Cirdan at the start of Season 2 of The Rings of Power. If you haven't seen them, I hope you find it funny anyway!



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Ha! Very sneaksy clever! I'm really loving the unconventional creativity possible with poetry!

I was being sneaky, yes... My tired brain was strongly suggesting to me that the easiest way not to write any of these things was to sit this one out, to be honest. And then my obstinate streak kicked in! (Also I love Christian Morgenstern. Sadly, not all of his clever jokes translate so easily.)