Comments on Melian’s Lament

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Melian's lament to the beech tree she knew before leaving Valinor is poignant and bittersweet. She only has the hope of being reunited with Elu Thingol there in Aman. I wonder whether they will even be able to see Lúthien again at the Dagor Dagorath, before Arda is remade. 🌿

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I wonder that a lot, too. Would Lúthien and Beren fight in the Dagorath? I’m not sure. (I have this very bittersweet headcanon about Túrin meeting his foster-parents again, though, and apologising). But I think it’s safe to say that at least Melian will be reunited with Lúthien in Arda healed. The Elves, though… we just don’t know what happens to them. Maybe we’ll see. 🩵