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Wonderful! Unexpected especially! I legit felt a lurch in my stomach when I imagined seeing what he's seeing <3 Also, I love your drabble idea. Drabbles are so special.

Ah, I’m so glad you mentioned that finishing line, because writing it made me chuckle, too. I think Eärendil decided that if he couldn’t change his situation, he could just as well make fun of himself. And I’m sure he’ll get used to it, eventually. But working through trauma responses is a nasty bit of work for sure. 
Thank you so much for leaving me this comment ❤️

It would not have occurred to me that it might work out quite that way for Olwe! 

But the trauma of that one particular crowd scene would certainly have been strong enough to leave its mark.