Amon Rûdh by Flora-lass
Fanwork Notes
For the Musicals challenge prompt:
Just like the earth, just like the sun, two worlds together are better than one.
Written using two four-word prompts posted at Alliance of Arda:
'snow, run, cosy, fire' and 'moon, pick, someone, beloved'.
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Summary:
A rather emotional Beleg-comes-back-to-Túrin acrostic.
Updated Oct 2026 with an acrostic from Túrin's POV.
Major Characters: Beleg, Túrin
Major Relationships: Beleg/Túrin
Challenges: Musicals, New Year's Resolution
Rating: Teens
Warnings: Creator Chooses Not to Warn
Chapters: 2 Word Count: 165 Posted on Updated on This fanwork is complete.
Amon Rûdh
Read Amon Rûdh
Atop this barren hill of snow and blood
Moonlight picks out the face of one beloved,
Of someone who stands far above the rest.
Now I return, in love though not wisest,
Receive the gifts I bring; and do not run
Unless it be to me - for I am done
Denying, so I seek your cosy fire.
Here I would stay, beside my heart's desire.
Stay with me
Written for a SWG instadrabbling session. The prompts were 'love, sorry, forgotten, carry' and ' let me be lawless and beloved'.
The first letter of each line spells 'stay with me', which Túrin had said to Beleg at their previous meeting.
Read Stay with me
So often have I regretted letting you leave alone,
That I did not do as you wished
And return to Doriath. I have forgotten many things, but never your care.
Yet I love these companions of mine. They need me; and
While I love you so much more,
I could not summon the will to cross the border.
The thought of being pardoned for a deed I did not do
Hurt my pride overmuch. I am truly sorry!
My tongue tangles the words, but I mean them
Even so. I will accept the gifts you carry, and your counsel too.
Cleverly and neatly done!…
Cleverly and neatly done!
And I like Beleg's characterization here.
Thank you so much! I was…
Thank you so much! I was quite happy with how this turned out. Originally there was going to be some foreboding, mention of death etc, but in the end it more or less became 'I want to be with you, so I'm here'. :)
Oh! It was delightful!
Oh! It was delightful!
Thank you! :)
Thank you! :)