Comments on A Constellation Called Gondolin

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sh3rry95 has requested the following types of constructive criticism on this fanwork: Characterization, Description/Imagery, Organization/Structure, Style, Worldbuilding. All constructive criticism must follow our diplomacy guidelines.


It's touching how Earendil tries to put what he learned from Idril into practice to comfort people, when he is still so young.

I like how you make this a piece about memory and imagination, as well as grief.

(I am glad you are also posting in Italian, although I appreciate the English translation.)