Comments on That Cometh Beyond Hope

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I love reading about Erestor! Mt favourite head canon always has him as an unreformed kinslayer, close to Maedhros.

The ghosts of Elured and Elurin very much haunt this fic, and the story of another murdered child was both sad and vivid.

I would very much like to read how Erestor gets in in Fornost!