I'm enjoying this very much!  Feanor and Nerdanel in their teens is quite irresistible.   I hope Feany succeeds in keeping his hands off her though.  I'm staying tuned.

Very promising! And thank you very much for that audacious pun! I badly needed a laugh just then... (I mean "Fish Hill".)

Crap, I'd totally forgotten I'd sent anything to you. Then again, I forget a lot of things these days. I lost my USB stick and found it in a shoe last year. O.o Anyways, I am so happy to see you writing this! I absolutely adore your Feanor. I can so see him causing mayhem in Mahtan's house. Especially if he "doesn't want to keep his hands off Mahtan's daughter". Which I know he won't. :P (And wow, I'd go mad if my computer broke down for three months. I can't stay off for a few hours, let alone months.) Thanks for writing! I can't wait to see how this all turns out!

Ara

Cute teen Feanorians in your other stories can only have super cute parents. What lovely characters!

Father doesn’t know when to hold off on the kids, in my opinion.

Premonitory, isn't it?

Feanor's horse was named Chocolate? =D =D And the possibility of Finarfin accidentally sitting on a wild boar made me crack up so bad. No family's perfect, indeed. Feanor had better think up some more detailed lies soon, methinks. Changing the subject all the time must get tiring even for him. ;)

What an amusing take at Nerdanel's and Feanor's youth! I'm curious how long Feanor can keep on fooling his kind hosts. Looking forward to the next instalments!

Wow, Feanor's really living up to his name. I like that Nerdanel's not afraid to stand up to him. Sure and she's got spunk. ;)

Yes, once again, Feanor punches or gets punched by someone. He never learns.

Well, at least he hasn't drawn a sword against Bril ;)

Yay, a new chapter! I really enjoy this story, it's so completely different from all the other "Young Nerdanel and Fëanor falling in love" stories (including my own) and extremely entertaining. Very curious to see how the race will turn out, and what will happen when eventually "Ernil's" identity is revealed...

How incredibly like Feanor, just rocking up at Tirion in the middle of the night! The nonchalance and sheer randomness you've given him are so funny and for me, very in-character. I don't think there's a single chapter I've read so far that didn't make me giggle uncontrollably.

So in the end they didn't need to run away...

Beautiful story. Congratulations! I'm looking forward to NewlyWeds in Tirion;)

"She’s looking at me the way that Indis looks at other people’s shoes" asdfgh.  Finarfin accidently sitting n a bear. I'm so glad I'm not done with this fic yet - it really is dangerously funny, espeically dangerously so when eating.