What an interesting perspective on the sinking of Beleriand! Very moving. I really enjoyed this. 

I love this earthen view of the cataclysm, and also your explanation of why the mountain range split where and how it did. Also the way that they can feel the songs, even if they can't hear them. This has simultaneously such a solid feel to it as well as magic. Marvellous!

Ah the oft forgotten Dwarves!  Yes, this was fantastic. 

"But Outside did have it's beauties" - I love this, not just because it's true but it's such an important reminder that Non-Home (tm) places have their own beauty that doesn't need to compete with Home to still be beautiful. <3

So much empathy with Thórdri's perceptions and their specific and personal feelings about their world!​​​​​​

Ahhh, loved it!

So cool to see this perspective on the end of the first age!

Beautifully written! I love how you have written the emotion of the dwarves and how in the end his dwarrow spirit has come out: there is work, useful work, to do and he will do it!

Ohh, I like this a lot! What a fascinating point of view of Beleriand's sinking, and why the Ered Luin ended up the way they do. I am glad that Thórdri is able to find beauty and purpose still in the aftermath of everything.