Tritina: Sirion by sallysavestheday

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Fanwork Notes

A tritina for the October 2023 Experimental challenge, using the prompt "formal verse".

Fanwork Information

Summary:

The Sons of Fëanor descend on Sirion. Elwing rises.

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Artwork Type: No artwork type listed

Genre: Poetry

Challenges: Experimental

Rating: General

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Chapters: 1 Word Count: 89
Posted on 23 October 2023 Updated on 23 October 2023

This fanwork is a work in progress.


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Oh this is marvellous!

(I'd not heard of a tritina before and of course had to look it up.)

I really love what you've crafted here, with the evolution of their story subtly echoed by the shifted repetition. Well done!

I love how the form (and the formality) reinforce what you are saying with this. Really effective and beautiful.