After The End by cuarthol
Fanwork Notes
For the Dip the Ladle challenge prompt:
And all that land was ever light,
for when it came to dusk of night
from precious stones there issued soon
a light as bright as sun at noon.
~ Sir Orfeo (Tolkien's translation, 369-72)
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Summary:
[F]or his father was dearer to him than the light of Valinor or the peerless works of his hands; - The Silmarillion
Major Characters: Fëanor, Finwë
Major Relationships: Fëanor & Finwë
Genre: Fixed-Length Ficlet
Challenges: Dip the Ladle, New Year's Resolution
Rating: General
Warnings:
Chapters: 1 Word Count: 205 Posted on Updated on This fanwork is complete.
After The End
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Fëanor held out his hands, receiving the pure, unbroken gems of his own making. Tears streaked his face for the suffering of his sons for these: his treasures, their torments. Long he gazed into them, recalling the light of Valinor when even his own joy was not yet marred. Long he held them in memory of their making, but the pleasure they once brought him was dulled by time and myriad sorrows.
A touch on his shoulder, gentle but firm, drew him from thought. He turned to look into the eyes of his father. There was a sad smile on Finwë’s lips, but love unending in his gaze as he cupped Fëanor’s cheek.
Then Fëanor took up his hammer and brought it down upon the Silmarils, and they shattered and opened; light spilled forth, a flood filling the hollows and depths, banishing shadow, and all the light that was from the very beginning shone in the darkness.
What became then of the world he cared not, giving heed to no other creature but his father and his sons returned. For an age of this new world they stood unmoving, the restored world being nothing but the restoration to one another.
Ohhh this is beautiful!
Ohhh this is beautiful!
Thank you so much!
Thank you so much!
I can't quite find the words…
I can't quite find the words to express how beautiful this is! Feanor sacrificing the Silmarils and sharing their light - and only caring about his family. Amazing.
<3 Thank you - I think…
<3 Thank you - I think Feanor really did care most for his family, even if he had a narrow definition of that family.
ahhhhhh so emotional (I…
ahhhhhh
so emotional
(I would try and be more eloquent about this, but it's late, and I'm still fried from exams)
I totally understand - thank…
I totally understand - thank you! <3
What a wonderful last line! …
What a wonderful last line!
A little like Thingol and Melian's meeting, only quite different, of course.
Also, a beautiful description of the light spilling out!
I did draw on the imagery of…
I did draw on the imagery of Melian/Thingol for a touch of inspiration. I'm so glad you enjoyed it, thank you!
What became then of the…
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Gorgeous description and very moving.
Thank you <3
Thank you <3