Comments on Call to the West

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For a land free of evil, this seems like a very cruel thing to do. Great use of the anti-promt.

The sea longing always felt like one of those cases where the Valar just don't quite get the Children.

It just seems cruel to me to induce the sea longing in elves, when they might have been perfectly happy where they were, until they made the mistake of "looking at the ocean"

And now they have genetically induced Fernweh. I don't know. Feels weird to me.

Very much so! They seem a bit self centred when it comes to wanting the company of the Elves. This feels like a natural extension to their motivation to bring them to Valinor in the first place. (I forget the actual quote in The Silm, but it reads to me that heir safety seemed more like an excuse and their real reason was that they wanted their company.)

This does seem rather like a poem, I think! It's so beautiful, but painful, with its use of words like claws and ensnared. My favourite line is 'Their song cares not for the lands...' - I love how the narrator is thinking beyond their own feelings.

absolutely. I imagine by the time the Third Age rolls around there might even be a few elves born in Middle-Earth that have only the vaguest of ideas about Valinor and everything, and then suddenly getting that urge to sail must feel like insanity. I'm suddenly thinking of the sailors that believed they could fall off the edge of the world if they sailed too far out. 
Do Elves intrinsically know how to find the Straight Road? Or do they set out and hope for the best? Hmmm much to think about

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