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Absolutely heartbreaking and beautiful.  The rhythm of this is so good, you feel the stops and starts in the ways that the paragraphs are apportioned to different amounts of time.  I don't know which chapter is my favorite!  They're all so moving.

(Could I get a Scavenger Hunt prompt?)

Thank you! It was such an interesting challenge, to keep all the thoughts I wanted to have in 50 words. Somehow both more constricting and easier than a single drabble, if that makes sense? 

And, in the spirit of Mirrors Cracking, have a prompt about another famous thing breaking: "Of snares eluded, broken traps, / The prison opening, the chain that snaps."