Comments on Found Family Lost

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I just love the structure of this, with Maglor's swirl of felings building up to Elrond's more structured, but still undefinable, thoughts about his fostering... And that Maglor's feelings unswirling, tumbling towards that final word - lost. Powerful stuff!

I like the shape this makes: the swelling and ebbing that describes Maglor's experience contrasted with the stable block of text that represents Elrond's point of view.

It seems to fit the complexity of their situation and emotions very well!

I read this in the fanzine, but  I don't think I managed to leave a comment at the time. It is good to revisit it.

(I think this Scavenger Hunt clue describes you: The home office of the SWG is located in a country that celebrates its 250th birthday this year. The pen name of this creator references the birth year of that country. Assuming that is correct, could I have a prompt, please?)

Thank you! Yes, it was rather easy to read something solely in the zine and forget to comment.

(It does indeed describe me! Here's your prompt: https://unsplash.com/photos/late-summer-storm-VfwlH63_y5U (ID: a dark, stormy sky over a sandy beach with sea grasses on a small dune; a white-capped wave in the distance rolls onto the lakeshore.)