That Forlorn Lover by Elrond's Library
Fanwork Notes
Inspired by this quote from the Challenge Prompt List:
I have been in Sorrow’s kitchen and licked out all the pots. Then I have stood on the peaky mountain wrapped in rainbows, with a harp and a sword in my hands.
~ Zora Neale Hurston, Dust Tracks on a Road
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Summary:
Fingon's rescue of Maedhros in An Attempt at poetry
For the July 2025 Challenge Swinging 40s
Major Characters: Fingon
Major Relationships: Fingon/Maedhros
Genre: Poetry
Challenges: Swinging 40s
Rating: General
Warnings:
Chapters: 1 Word Count: 124 Posted on Updated on This fanwork is a work in progress.
That Forlorn Lover
Read That Forlorn Lover
The air is fresh, the mountains solid, the stars shine bright
He climbs another, that forlorn lover, and shakes apart with dread
The borrowed harp in hand, the sharp sword on hip feels right
But to dark Thangorodrim his feet bear his golden-ribboned head
Free beneath the sky and sea
Over land reeking with Shadow
He flies, seeking what might be
The fate of beloved Nelyo
Far away, far above, far too high but just in sight
A whispered prayer, devotion marred, tears in eyes that refuse to shed
The eagle’s call, a blessing pure, answered from a height
He climbs another, that forlorn lover, stealing what is half dead
Free beneath the sky and sea
Over land reeking with Shadow
They fly, seeking the safety
Of a home free of all Sorrow
Chapter End Notes
An attempt was made ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
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So lovely!
This is lovely!
This is lovely!
I like it a lot! I think it…
I like it a lot!
I think it is good how you have used the long line stanza and the alternating short lines, with repetition and variation here.
Effective and captures the emotion.
Gorgeous <3 A successful…
Gorgeous <3
A successful attempt I should say! I felt it captured the feeling of forlorn very well, yet still with hope.