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"!!!!" said the reader. This was really impactful. And those last lines that Melkor has are perfect... really made my skin crawl. Framing this as a battle of song, light against dark, much like Finrod and Sauron worked beautifully. I loved it. 

Oh, my heart - talk about crying tears of happiness! What a beautiful chapter! Such a lovely surprise to meet Curufin's daughters, and the new hedgehogs (although I had a big lump in my throat at the loss of Leicheg - RIP). But the reunion with Daeron, and especially the description of him when Maglor first saw him again...just wonderful. :) Looking forward to the new Mereth Aderthad! (Oh, and I'm delighted by the mention of Queen Firiel - it's made me think about her meeting hobbits, which I should have considered before, but hadn't...)

(All in such stark contrast to the terrifying Prologue, and poor Finwë's mounting fear. I just knew that foot was going to come down on him. It will be very interesting to see how you tie this in with the rest of the story).

Oh how beautiful it was to read this reunion between Maglor and Daeron. I am so pleased the Daeron has been subsumed into the family Fëanorian as if he always belonged there. It is beyond lovely that Curufin has two daughters and they seem just the kind of kids that are going to be sweet and mischeivous all at once. I cannot wait to see how that prequel ties into all of this, as it currently sits their ominously just out of sight I think. Also RIP Leicheg. 🥺

 

'The River Incident' is truly family folklore now. It has capital letters! 

Ah, the way you wrote Maglor and Fëanor's meeting was so beautiful. I am glad for both of them that it went as well as it did, but there is clearly still a long way for the two of them to go. 

I got a bit behind reading this and am catching up and I just wanted to say how very sweet the imagery of Celebrimbor painting constellations on his sisters's ceilings and teaching them about them is. Really, really gorgeous ❤️