Comments on Pants for the Pantless

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The Black Rider on an angry, stubborn alpaca is now something I cannot un-imagine. Thank you for that most excellent mental picture!

Míriel is so right, everyone is going to be wearing these. I love that little snippet of Míriel & Fëanor share the same brand of self-assuredness. :)

I enjoyed your vivid description of the details of Miriel's working process; it was very convincing.

You managed to show us very telling glimpses of her relationships with other people, Finwe, but also the other Noldor and Olwe, all within that short piece!

Saddle sores are a very good reason for elven pants!