Fragments discarded by Pengolodh by AdmirableMonster
Fanwork Notes
Inspired by the presentation "Beleriand as Postcolonial Palimpsest" by Dr. Zara AK at the 2025 SWG-hosted Mereth Aderthad.
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Summary:
Pengolodh tries to write about the kinslaying at Sirion. He fails.
Major Characters: Pengolodh, Elwing
Major Relationships:
Genre: Experimental, In-Universe Artifact
Challenges:
Rating: Teens
Warnings: Creator Chooses Not to Warn
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Chapters: 1 Word Count: 276 Posted on Updated on This fanwork is complete.
Fragments discarded by Pengolodh
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She died
She became a bird
The light went out of the hill the cottage the tower.
The Silmaril was taken
Elwing of Doriath was the heart of the Havens of Sirion. When the refugees from Gondolin trooped weary into that place, the first thing we they saw was the light of the Silmaril, shining white and kind across a muddy dirt road. She was young and angry, and I once heard her complain about everyone wanting her damn nightlight, why shouldn’t it be hers?
She got on better with Dírhavel than with me. She liked Men. She left them all to burn when the Sons of Fëanor came. She left her own children
My mother
Elrond and Elros were sons of her noble line. They were very young at the time of the attack on the Havens. The Lady Elwing refused to treat with kinslayers demanding a blood price. She was stubborn and headstrong and did not have the right to deny them on behalf of the whole counsel, but she could only look at them and see the monsters of her childhood. They were monsters They were monsters.
They never taught me how to write about something like this. Perhaps Dírhavel would be able to sing about it. His stories mattered, mine are nothing but a chronicle. I am not Pengolodh. Eärendil’s mother named me that, because I was the only one left.
I am always the only one left, and I cannot tell this story. I don’t even know what happened, and I was there.
Thus began the last and cruelest slaying of Elf by Elf.
Oh, that is beautiful
I'm working up a whole biography of him, and you just did likewise in what amounts to a haiku. Splendid!
thank you so much! i adore…
thank you so much! i adore Pengolodh <333
Very effective use of those…
Very effective use of those crossings-out!
Very believable that it should be hard or even impossible to write down.