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Oh, I like so many things about this! Your clever incorporation of the title prompts (and he is so apt for the Kids prompt!) And all his thoughts justifications (although I do also sympathise with him, torn between duty and loyalty and his own desires and I'm such a sea-baby I can't help siding with him!)

(I was surprised when I first discovered flotsam and jetsam referred to different types of things, but now remember by jetsam=jettisoned, flot=just floating.)

I love the ship and marine imagery you've woven in to this! And it feels as if it captures Aldarion just aright with the rejection of his father's wisdom in favour of adventuring, far lands and what he perceives as greater in Middle Earth.