Those Who Linger by Finitely Venerated
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Fanwork Notes
Written for the instadrabbling prompts "winter, bitter, linger, fall".
Warnings: oblique references to character death, trauma/depression.
I'm fairly new to creative writing, so any constructive feedback would be much appreciated.
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Summary:
Turgon yearns for happier days, days before he knew cold. But he knows in his heart that some things are forever lost, and wonders if he, too, is merely a remnant of the departed, a spent husk to be cleared if spring should ever bloom again.
Major Characters: Turgon
Major Relationships: Elenwë/Turgon
Genre: Ficlet
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Rating: General
Warnings: Check Notes for Warnings
Chapters: 1 Word Count: 225 Posted on Updated on This fanwork is complete.
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