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Wondrous. I received a lovely dose of awe and curiosity sated from this little fic. I love dwarves and I love first person, so I was satisfied by being so close to this amusing, wry, refreshingly pious character. I'd love to follow her around more.

I really enjoyed this journey to the south with your Dwarf, and sharing in their thoughts as well as the wonders experienced after the toil of the journey, and I love the "souvenir" they brought back.