Comments on For a Better World

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"...feel terribly sorry..."

Whenever a reader says something like this, or whenever a reader says that my story made her/him cry, I feel that I need to appologize! 😀 But then again, as Gandalf says, not all tears are evil.

Yes, it's a dark society, but all I can say now is repeat my promise from the notes in the beginning - there *will* be nice moments 😉

I am so happy to hear you enjoy the story. Thank you so much for reading and for your nice comment. You put a big smile on my face 😘