Our Doom Descends by tnlaw415  

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Summary:

A Noldo follower of Fëanor laments the First Kinslaying and the Flight of the Noldor

Major Characters: Fëanor, Noldor

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Genre: Poetry

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Rating: General

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Chapters: 1 Word Count: 737
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Hey, you made it! 

Good to see your poem here. I enjoyed reading it with a nicer formatting than the squashed up formatting Reddit allows. The contrast between the hopeful and grand words in the longer stanza with the "Our doom descends" stanzas showed the tension between the exiles minset and the reality that they're going to be hit with down the line. I liked it. 😊