Heat by ford_of_bruinen  

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In memory of Keiliss who loved this universe's Maglor and helped me to find his voice 

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Summary:

Maglor just after the attack on Sirion

Part of the same Universe as Thangorodrim, Vodka and Unhinged 

Major Characters: Maglor, Maedhros

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Rating: General

Warnings: Violence (Mild)
Chapters: 1 Word Count: 638
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Urgh! Devastatingly bleak. (complementary)

(Also, that idea of irritatingly hot and humid conditions contrasting with Valinor's perfection sets the stage so marvellously.)

Thank you! Love that i got the bleakness across

I wrote the first draft during the summer heatwaves and that first paragraph just popped into my head when it was hot, humid (Ireland always is) and it prevented me from sleep.

I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm glad to be able to write again.