Forest's Rulers by Erulisse
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Summary:
For Tolkien Weekly’s Fell Beasts Challenge - Spiders
Because it is National Poetry Month, I present a poem drabble for Spiders...
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Genre: Poetry
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Rating: General
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Chapters: 1 Word Count: 84 Posted on Updated on This fanwork is complete.
Chapter 1
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Forest's Rulers
Midnight black when fully grown,
mottled brown when newly formed.
Solitary hunter, but multitudes mother,
favored by Dol Guldur's own.
Treetop scampering, spinning, whirling,
jumping, dangling, chittering, swirling.
Through the branches ever searching,
stalking, following, high limbs perching.
Scenting for warm-blooded meals,
two legged, four legged, all appeal,
punctured skins, wrappings tight,
aloft to secret larders alight.
Insides liquefied, a spider's delight,
motherly loving 'til hunger's next bite.
Wrapping legs and deadly kisses,
answering the Dark Lord's wishes.
Yet more spiderlings always come,
from mothers, nieces, sisters' spawn.
Slay but five, kill hundreds more,
WE rule o'er the forest floor.
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Please read, and if you like this, please let me know.
(1) Comment by elfscribe for Forest's Rulers [Ch 1]
Such a clever poem and in one hundred words yet. This has such a Tolkieny feel, almost like an answer to Bilbo's Lazy Lob and crazy Cob. Such spiderly glee as they spin, and snare, and multiply. Shudder! Great job. Keep writing!
Re: (1) Comment by elfscribe for Forest's Rulers [Ch 1]
Thank you for your very kind words, elfscribe. It was quite a challenge, but I enjoyed it and I am delighted that you also do. I appreciate your reading and reviewing.
- Erulisse (one L)
(2) Comment by mistrali for Forest's Rulers [Ch 1]
"Insides liquefied, a spider's delight,
motherly loving 'til hunger's next bite."
Ugh, that line gives me goosebumps! ;) This reminded me very much of Bilbo's episode in Mirkwood. Very spiderly: well done!
Re: (2) Comment by mistrali for Forest's Rulers [Ch 1]
Thanks! I wanted to challenge myself, and doing a poem as a 100 word drabble seemed like a good challenge at the time - LOL. I hope you have a good Samhain and continue reading and enjoying the stories posted on SWG.
- Erulisse (one L)