Excellent!  Love the beefed up confrontation between Anairë and Fëanáro.  That really works well.  Characterization is well-crafted per your usual.  Anairë and Nolo are both compelling, and I eagerly look forward to reading their continued tale.  You're on a roll with this!

*Swoons over the Aiken poem*

Really enjoyed each scene in this chapter...

Long and flimsy banners of sheer grey linen curled in the wind between the columns.  When Anairë had been a child, she had run among them, smiling at the soft touch-kisses the material had pressed to her cheeks.  Now, she pushed them aside carelessly.

Oooooh, nice!  This is a great example of your talent for taking a simple material object, like a curtain, and turning it into something meaningful.  Brava!

Excellent portrayal of Ana's indignation at Nolo's undermining her.  Really felt her frustration and I could identify with her.

And the wrestling scene?  OMG.  That is hot!  Fantastic work with ratcheting up the sexual tension between them

I like it a lot. It is vibrantly alive and feels true and authentic to me and is filled with youth and promise (which like most Silm fics makes it poignantly bittersweet in light of our knowledge of the future of this charming couple). I really am growing to like Anairë and Fingolfin more and more with every chapter.

Very vivid! I like the way you are not just portraying them as a couple but as part of a whole circle of friends and family.

Playing catchup today, I've just torn through your last few chapters quite happily. Really enjoying the way you've characterized people as well as the descriptions - and really enjoying the story!