The Stars of Home by Idrils Scribe  

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Summary:

Elrohir has been found after his long abduction by the Black Númenóreans of Umbar. He comes home to Rivendell, but all is not well: the Elf-child that was taken is now a Man grown. War and darkness have left Elrohir deeply scarred, and even at home there is danger...

An alternate universe for the Under Strange Stars series, in which Elrohir goes with Glorfindel instead of running away from him after the events of Under Strange Stars. This story can be enjoyed without having read the original.

Many thanks to Grundy and Marchwriter for their excellent beta-reading and brainstorming.

Major Characters: Elrohir, Elrond, Celebrían, Elladan, Glorfindel, Witch-king of Angmar

Major Relationships: Elrohir & Glorfindel, Elladan & Elrohir, Elladan & Elrohir & Celebrían & Elrond

Genre: Adventure, Family, Hurt/Comfort

Challenges:

Rating: Teens

Warnings: In-Universe Racism/Ethnocentrism, Violence (Moderate)

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Chapters: 1 Word Count: 4, 842
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Table of Contents

Glossary of Adûnaic terms:

Mulkhêr: Melkor, Morgoth
The Zigûr: Sauron (lit. “The Sorcerer”)
Adûnaîm: the Númenóreans
Anadûnê: Númenor
Ammathâni: Valinor


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Your original characters are always so well drawn and your world building is fabulous!

I felt sorry for him, even though he doesn't come over as a vary nice person. His visceral terror at expecting a painful death really leapt off the page!

Hi Fredbassett! 

Thanks for letting me know that you're reading and enjoying, that means a lot to me. And of course thanks for those kind words about our villain. I'm glad to hear that his panic gets across. He's made a bad decision though.... you'll see!