Really interesting!   Waiting for continuation...

This is a really interesting take on the Halls of Mandos.  The scenes before he leaves are so atmospheric and dream-like.  I'm curious what will happen next!

I thought of this story today and checked to see if I had missed an update. It's a wonderful beginning. It makes a lovely one-shot. But I would so very much like to read more. I think it is the only story I have read with this sort of transition from the Halls of Mandos back into the "real world."

I do hope you pick this up, rawr balrog - I wanted to tell you how very intersting this is, the nature of 'death', the concept of waiting and the notion of his redemption. It is very very well written with a kind of puzzled objectivity that seems entirely appropriate to me.