I love this so much! The idea of them meeting before Nan Elmoth gives so much more depth to their relationship. I'm definitely adopting this headcanon. 

Your descriptions of Lórien and of Melian are exquisite. I felt like I was walking through there with Elwë. This is particular - what a lovely description of him (beginning to) fall in love with her:

"She raised her hand and sang a word in Valarin that made Elwë’s body tremble. Instinctively, he found himself cowering before her might. But then – an astonishing sight. Melyanna’s voice had summoned songbirds to appear all around her. They flew in the air right above them, singing. Their song was both alluring and delightful, and even if Elwë had been momentarily frightened before, the birdsong erased all fear and doubt from his mind."

Thanks so much for this beautiful, original piece about an underexplored relationship that is nonetheless so central to the story. . 

I really like what you did with this idea from NoME!

It seems to give a rather different angle on their relationship, but well worth exploring! 

I enjoyed the imaginative descriptions of the setting and your reflections on Ainurin attitudes. 

Love this!

The Valar try so hard to make sure they sleep well, not really understanding how it works. They are different, it also shows in how Melyanna don't understands Elwe's joke. His meeting with her was lovely. He's going to search for that other tree!

I really like the idea that Thingol and Melian met first in Aman, and their encounter in Beleriand was a reunion!

This was lovely!