How good to get your teen-Feanorians back! I had forgotten how irresistible your teen-Maglor is. A horse with that personality can only be a part of Feanor's household.

I like Curufin's combination of snootiness and helpfulness here! And I sympathize with Andril over the trowel.

I'm so happy that you got another chapter up in this story.  And now she may be swept up into the bigger picture - it might have been better for her to have never met the brothers, but either way, she's in for the penny and in for the dollar.  

- Erulisse (one L)

I'm glad that the aliens returned you safe and sound to your laptop to continue the story!

Nitpick: At the beginning of this chapter, you've got "Caranthir" twice where the second time you seem to mean "Curufin"?

I'm so happy to see another chapter in this.  I was wondering what you would do about the slight "glitch" of distance between the two of them.  Now...how is she going to get across the Sundering Sea in the "wrong" direction?  

- Erulisse (one L)

Hey, why not?

I guess she probably stood a better chance with Osse than she would have with Uinen on this one.

Somehow there was country music playing in the background when I read most of this, and somehow that made the accents and farmer elves even more hilarious. The end was...I chocked on my tea. So beautifully unpoetic. Eru and that lecherous-looking old seagull"...hah! These were some of the most entertainingly un-elvish elves I've read so far.