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I like how you've used the double drabble to show the different points of view and the tensions between the two, as well as hinting at the problems and dangers they will have to face as a team.

I'd love to see how this investigation develops, but the piece does also feel as if it can be read on its own.

This is the first Star Wars AU I have read in the Silmarillion world, and it really works! These two reluctantly working together in order to solve galactic mysteries is a great setting and feels like a start of a longer story.