Comments on On the Nature of the Sindar’s Hunting the Petty-dwarves

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The idea that the Elves initially thought the Petty Dwarves were creatures of Morgoth is very plausible, and certainly more palatable. (no pun intended!)

I've always wondered: if the Elves assumed they were animals, did the Petty Dwarves go naked, or did the Elves assume clothing was part of their cunning animal nature? But if they were assumed to be Morgoth's creatures, that would explain a lot more.

I've also wondered whether the idea came from South African history (since he had a connection with the country) where the boers used to hunt the the Khoi and San bushmen for sport.

This is an iinterestiing account,well thought out and presented. You've also handled the sensitive subject matter well. 

Thank you for reading and commenting; I'm delighted you enjoyed the analysis!  I have also wondered how the Elves could dismiss clothing, if the Petty-dwarves wore any, and assume that they were animals, though you are right that if they saw them as creatures of Morgoth, they would be able to explain it.  With the text not really providing many clues, other than they appear to be clothed by the time Mîm is living a while later, I suppose one could headcanon either way.  That said, I presume the first Petty-dwarves were clothed, since they were the Dwarves exiled from Nogrod and Belegost.  But when those clothes wore out, it seems they would likely have to rely upon animal pelts or potentially woven plants, if they had the skill and knowledge to do the latter, at least until they had a well-established home.

Oh, that is a fascinating connection!  Hmm, though I suppose there's little way to know unless he stated so somewhere in his notes.

I enjoyed reading this meta about the Petty Dwarves, as their treatment by elves was rather awful. Interesting subject, and I guess we'll never really know for sure. 

I came over from AO3 to see whether the weird paragraphs show up on SWG as well, but the text is fine on here.