Crossed Paths by Flora-lass
Fanwork Notes
For the Swinging 40s challenge prompt:
'This cruel age has deflected me, like a river from this course. Strayed from its familiar shores, my changeling life has flowed into a sister channel.' ~ Anna Akhmatova.
400 words, written using prompts from the August 2025 instadrabbling session.
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Summary:
Tuor and Voronwë encounter Túrin at Ivrin. Hurt and not much comfort (but they try).
Major Characters: Tuor, Voronwë, Túrin
Major Relationships:
Genre: Alternate Universe, Fixed-Length Ficlet, Hurt/Comfort
Challenges: Swinging 40s
Rating: General
Warnings:
Chapters: 1 Word Count: 400 Posted on Updated on This fanwork is complete.
Crossed Paths
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Even as Voronwë showed Tuor the signs of the dragon's rampage, they heard cries of despair, and a Man all in black emerged from the trees. They saw years of woe etched on his face, as he gazed in dismay at the defilement of Ivrin. His footsteps slowed, and with a final cry he sank to the ground.
Tuor and Voronwë hastened to where he sat; the Man's hand went to his sword, but he accepted their assurances of goodwill.
‘You are beyond weary, friend,’ said Voronwë, pushing his hair aside and looking at him intently. ‘And full of grief. If you would come with us, we will find a place where you may rest awhile. Winter is upon us, and it is cold for mortals to be alone.’
‘How long is it since you ate, or slept?’ asked Tuor, recognising one in a state far worse than his own.
The Man shook his head. ‘I know not,’ he muttered, ‘and it does not matter. All that matters is that I find them.‘ He scrambled to his feet, staring around in confusion. ‘I found healing here, once,’ he continued. ‘But my healer is dead, and many others besides. There is nothing here now that could bring me ease.’
‘Where are you bound?’ Tuor asked, offering a steadying hand. ‘Do you know the way?’
The Man recoiled. ‘Do not hinder me,’ he said. ‘For I am cursed, and would not taint you. I am going home, if my Doom allows - but I do not know if my home is still there…’ And without another word, he turned, and stumbled away.
After a moment's thought, Voronwë followed, and pressed upon him as much of their precious store of waybread as could be spared. The Man's face twisted, as if with a painful memory, and he seemed to blink back tears. He nodded his thanks, and departed.
Sadly, Voronwë made his way back to Tuor. ‘He bears a heavy burden,’ he said. ‘I wonder what can have befallen?'
‘I wish he had stayed longer,’ said Tuor. ‘My heart aches for him. He reminded me of someone, though I cannot remember who.’
‘That is strange,’ Voronwë answered, ‘for he somehow reminded me of you, for all he appears as one of the Noldor, at first glance. I pray I never see you so distressed. Come, let us seek shelter from this evil wind.’
Chapter End Notes
(Written using the prompt sets 'grief, footsteps, years, slow' and 'tears, home, still, allow'.)
T-T this is beautiful. you…
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this is beautiful. you sketch the scene so vividly and poignantly. it's really sad -- i love how tolkien-esque it is for it to be made just a little bit better by a small gesture.
Thank you for this lovely…
Thank you for this lovely comment. Yes, I was trying to write in the spirit of The Children of Hurin, where so many characters with their own sorrows and burdens try so hard to look after each other...
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Ooh! I've always wondered what might have happened if they did meet here. I imagine Túrin longed for companionship and yet he still has the heart to keep away for fear of inflicting his curse on them. Which somehow makes it even sadder.
I really like this!
I also think he can't bear…
I also think he can't bear the thought of losing anyone else (the loss of Gwindor is especially hard in this moment). Thank you so much for reading and commenting.
Such a tragic meeting....
....of Tuor and Voronwë with Húrin. A heartbreaking scene, beautifully written.
Thank you so much. I'd…
Thank you so much. I'd always wanted them to meet - but when I tried to write it, it still felt just as sad...
Very well told, and that is…
Very well told, and that is a compelling connection between that prompt and that episode at Eithel Ivrin.
I really like that they try to help; their kindness comes through so clearly.
But it also is convincing that what they can do for Turin at this point is limited.
I really appreciate your…
I really appreciate your thoughtful comment. I couldn't help thinking of Túrin when I saw that prompt, although it's hard to put all my thoughts into words. I think Tuor and Túrin must sense that they have a connection, but with one blessed by Ulmo and the other cursed by Morgoth, they're just too far apart, and neither can change course. :(
What a touching scene,…
What a touching scene, despite all the hurt and anxiety. And your text flows so nicely.
Thank you so much!
Thank you so much!
So so heartbreaking! You did…
So so heartbreaking! You did an amazing job of conveying so much emotion in just a few paragraphs.
Thank you so much for…
Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I wish their meeting could have been a little happier, but it wasn't to be...